What makes a good design critic?

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While at CHI earlier this week, I went along to a session with the same title as this blog post. I was looking for some inspiration, something to take to a UDS (Ubuntu Developer Summit) session perhaps, something to turn into a blog post, food for thought.

The session at CHI included a food critic, a restaurant designer, a food stylist, a chef and a user experience director; correction: the chef couldn’t make it and Bill Buxton was supposed to be there but couldn’t so they asked the VP User Experience from Experian to step in (too much detail?).

I was very excited that this would be an interesting session but confess to giving up early. I think it was a great idea to put these people together but it just didn’t come together. No mind, the idea of it got me thinking.

Professional criticism is a genre. The food critic in attendance had worked hard at his particular tone of voice and had developed a persona that people would want to read. He talked about trying to give people a sense of a restaurant then was clearly delighted with the story he was able to tell about a restaurant with a particular set of photographs which he wove through his review. There is no doubt that his job is to inform but it is also to entertain. Restaurants need to be written about; reviews are a major part of their marketing plans. I can only speak for myself here but I enjoy reading reviews and I like them to be memorable. I will listen to what the critic has to say about the food and am curious about the atmosphere and service but a memorable review will might make me visit. The photographs from the example given would probably have enticed me into the restaurant – be they ridiculed or celebrated – as long as the food sounded good. Interestingly, the photographer rang the critic to defend their work.

The architect/restaurant designer told the story of a new restaurant that he worked on which had got a poor review – not for the food, but for his work, for the atmosphere. He described ringing the particular critic, inviting her for lunch and giving her the context of brief, budget, design intent.

Criticism as a word has negative connotations and yet, without it, progress would be extremely hard. I can imagine a scenario with a chef: “Try this… You like?”, “More tarragon you say? Interesting.”, “Hmmm, what about this?”.

Criticism and feedback are a vital part of any creative process, as is quality control.

Going back to our chef for a moment he may be willing to hear suggestions while he is deciding how to plate a dish: “You think it’s too green?” but, when the dish is about to be carried off to a table, the mode is very different: “There is no radish on this plate!”

The aim is, I have no doubt, to only let the food critic see the plate that has the radish.

In order to make my job, and my team, as useful as possible to the open-source and Ubuntu community, I need feedback at 3 levels.

1) I need to know if the radish isn’t on the plate.

2) I need to hear about the tarragon idea.

3) I need to be told about the overall impression. If the photos on the wall are distracting you from the food, I need to be able to address that.

Stealing an analogy that came up over lunch last Friday; releasing software in alpha is like inviting people to watch pre-production rehearsals of a play. As we see and hear it all come together we are still chopping and changing the script, the costumes, and the set.

For our part my team and I will do our best to do as follows:

1) Let you know we meant to put a radish on that plate.

2) Create a forum where the addition of tarragon can be suggested and discussed.

3) Continue to read the reviews.

The third area is the most interesting. While I am sure it would be a very interesting exercise to take every person who writes a review out for lunch and have a conversation about context and design intent, this approach isn’t scalable. Let’s start with design.canonical.com, #ayatana on irc, the Ayatana mailing list and, you are welcome to come and find us at UDS.

Tarragon you say? Interesting.

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Ivanka

Ivanka Majic works in technology. She was Head of Design for Ubuntu, service managed Digital Marketplace through to beta, was acting director of digital for the Labour Party. She lives and works in Brighton where she works with the council’s digital first team, does a bit of teaching at Sussex University, and works with her husband on projects like restaurantsbrighton.co.uk and the BRAVOs. She has also started a podcast with her friend Michael which you can listen to at grandpodcast.com.

9 comments

  • Step 1 is incomplete. Besides saying you meant to put radish, you should explain *why* you did it. When someone is not aware of the reasons of something, the usefulness of any criticism he can offer about this something is dramatically limited.

    When the buttons were changed, it took some time before someone from the design team (you) said *anything* about it and it took even *more* time until Mark finally revealed the reasoning. Meanwhile, all kinds of assumptions popped on the internet: “they did it to copy OSX”, “they did it randomly”, “they did it for the sake of change”.

    I did not approve of assuming reasons, but there’s not much else people can do when requests for the reasoning are consistently ignored.

  • Move the minimize/maximize buttons back to the right you say? Because of their relationship with the scrollbars you say? Interesting!

  • Everything is nice…
    But, could you change you mail notifier nick from “Balkan Witch” to something else? 😉

    The first time i got the mail , you had me bewildered for a min!

  • Wow, that was very nice of you 🙂
    I actually just wanted to mention my surprise/shock/confusion , when i first noticed the name.. Didnt really expect you to change it.
    Probably will save other new commenters the scare . 😉 Thanks Ivanka

  • Great point, Donny. Why bother offering feedback– invited feedback– when they’re not going to listen to it anyway? That business with the buttons was really bad, and pretty typical. No acknowledgment of concerns (like breaking accessibility apps, for one big example), just a lot of deflection and not taking people seriously, handwaving away anything they don’t want to hear.

  • No problem Vish, in my pre-canonical days my blog was read by people who knew me so calling it Balkan Witch was amusing – I only recently got feedback that for people who don’t know me it has very negative connotations. I totally missed the fact that the comment email would still have the Balkan Witch thing, thanks for letting me know!

    Dylan, I like what you did there – nice! 🙂

    Donny, Frances, I invite you to start here http://design.canonical.com/2010/04/notification-area/ let’s see where that takes us, shall we?

  • Speaking as a designer and critic responding to Donny ‘*why* you did it.’ to the end user is usually unimportant – and rightly so. You might have all reasons in the world to make that button green or red or put something somewhere – but this isn’t fine art where you can spin all the reasoning in the world *hands up – I’m a Fine Arts grad* but if the reason that button is red or green is interfering – say cos the user is colourblind for a rather obvious and overplayed example (and probably wrong but hey) then they don’t need to hear theory nor reason – they want it fixed.

    Of course when something is purely aesthetic then you can give that reasoning – but in a working tool like an OS there aren’t many things that are purely asethetic. Boring as it is, but making it function well AND look great is the challenge.

    New user to Ubuntu (GNOME, 10.4 LTS) here (and weirdly did some temp work for Canonical many moons ago on that horrible brown background – thankfully gone, using the the green abstract one atm…oh open source imagery was a bitch until CC came along!) – I love the design, it works for me over what I’ve seen on other ‘flavours’. The only qualm I have as a laptop user is sometimes the windows use a little more space that I’d like, but compared to Windoze that’s minor I guess…a lighter thinner theme – is that available? And yes I’ve tweaked the font sizes…but I like the simplicity, reminds me of OSX without the distracty-bounce dock and opal glass theme everywhere.

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Ivanka

Ivanka Majic works in technology. She was Head of Design for Ubuntu, service managed Digital Marketplace through to beta, was acting director of digital for the Labour Party. She lives and works in Brighton where she works with the council’s digital first team, does a bit of teaching at Sussex University, and works with her husband on projects like restaurantsbrighton.co.uk and the BRAVOs. She has also started a podcast with her friend Michael which you can listen to at grandpodcast.com.

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